Awesome poem Stillie! I love the fluid running together of thoughts in this. You should write and post more poems!
I think maybe a lil punctuation would help make a bit more sense of it, because that helps define where one thought ends and the other begins. Yeah, fixing the typos would help, but overall I like the feel of the poem.
Yes, this has real possibilities. More poetry please.
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Awesome poem Stillie! I love the fluid running together of thoughts in this. You should write and post more poems!
I think maybe a lil punctuation would help make a bit more sense of it, because that helps define where one thought ends and the other begins. Yeah, fixing the typos would help, but overall I like the feel of the poem.
Yes, this has real possibilities. More poetry please.
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